RadicalCarrot

Thanks for the review! Yeah, the beginning was very slowly paced. I think I got really caught up intruding to paint a perfect image. Regarding the note, there actually is ...

Yeah I had a feeling it was a little exaggerated. And I was sure that the ending was supposed to be mean in any way. That was just sort of ...

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I actually really enjoyed this story and I felt like something I would love to review. I'm mainly going to look at elements that are not grammar (because my own ...

Thank you for the helpful feedback! The earrings are just decorations. She does have webbed fingers, but I just sort of forgot to draw them. The ability to hear is ...

I added more info because I realized it might be helpful!

Ok wait I do have a full body picture, I never expected people to like, actually be interested in this let me do a little bit more explanation seeing that ...

Thank you! She's supposed to be a koi fish, that's really what inspired her color palette.

You're welcome! I tried to go in depth with my critiques but I hope none of them came off as harsh.

Thank you for your review. I do tend to make a lot of grammar mistakes, it's a major weakness in my writing and one I'm trying to work on. Thanks ...

Thank you for the feedback. I agree that when it came to description, I did go a little overboard and still tend to do so. It's not something I considered ...

I really enjoyed this. While it was short, it seemed like a clip of something much bigger. Like a blip in these people's lives who had super deep character to ...

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This is incredible! I enjoy how you looped the story around and showed how the cycle would start again. I also enjoyed the perspective you chose to write this from. ...

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Interesting to read. This is very speculative and I'll admit, depressing. It was clearly thought out and made some very interesting points. However, in some parts it was a little ...

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Incredibly gripping. I'll admit, I had no idea what I was walking into then I opened this up. The story was short to the point and achieved what it wanted ...