RachitBansal

Well written prose! The imagery was exquisite! I loved the following: 'The woman that walked into the room wore an elegant dress like a smoky mist. The breast hand stitched ...

Thank you so much! This was by far the comment I've reviewed on this site.

Yes good point by you that we can't dream when sleepless but dreams are not what are seen during sleep

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Thank you for your review.

That stanza means that we humans have been chasing behind toys, i.e. materialistic things, and the Earth has been suffering giving them to us.

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Wow! I do loved this love poem. I generally don't like love things but this one did make me feel something. I love the first stanza: 'i hope that he’s ...

There's no better happiness fir a poet Thank you

Thank you so much for this wonderful review, I will definitely improve on what you told

I am newbie here too! All the best!

That's again! :) yeah! So now it's time for me to post one of my rhyming poems!

I don't really like abusive words in poetry. You used one in the very first line. Poetry is meant for emotions, I don't see many here. You seem to cure ...

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I don't really like abusive words in poetry. You used one in the very first line. Poetry is meant for emotions, I don't see many here. You seem to cure ...

I've tried to work upon the things you told. I understood the firmatting in here and unjust end it. Please have a look. Thank you!