Quiz

All was wonderfully narrated until his mother pulled the gun. She moved much too quickly and efficiently for being stabbed in the neck. Also, three shots direct shots to the ...

It must be hard to write an autobiographical Haiku. The best approach would probably be some sort of symbolism, since Haiku are supposed to be about nature... Child on the ...

Though I cannot relate, I can venture into the emotions involved... I don't feel the couplets really matches the poem. However, that's mrely a personal choice; if it works for ...

Nice work, Misty Lynn. The prologue was particularly nice... The character is very cool. I like the idea that he is a very attractive person, but with so many scars ...

Nice. Very nice. I like the analogy of people as countries. This couple stanzas-- It wasn’t so long ago I left prints in your sand, And you wandered through my ...

Per your request... Well, I refuse to continue beating this particular dead horse, rather, I'll offer you help instead. If you'd like, I'll go through this and edit it all ...

By your request... I thought this was very creative. Your word choices were dead on, there were no words in it that leapt out at me, screaming "FIX ME DAMN ...

As per your request, I have read this (a second time check your first response lol). Here are my thoughts; Setting: unknown, appears to be late American colonial period (1600-1700?) ...

Madness? Not at all. Sounds like heven to me....if only we could solve that whole cavity issue... Yeah, I like chocolate. Do you have chocolate in your candy land? Some ...

Of course this isn't REAL... :roll: Though, those kids that walk by the basketball courts every night do kind of freak me much black! :P ...Kidding, I assure you. I ...

The following are just my musings on each stanza, don't mind them too much. Most are rhetorical anyway. Darkness settles in Bringing me to life My instincts, my dreams, my ...

Who is this guy? Does he not know how to treat a woman!? Sounds like the other gal is being used...:( Haha, enough of that... If I understood this correctly, ...

A new poem! I can definitely tell you wrote this after just waking up...but that's good, since that's how you wanted the tone to feel, right? IT's not that you ...

Impressive. That's the first word that came to my mind after reading this. Somehow you've managed to put emotions on paper, (or in this case a computer screen) which is ...

There's no poll, Hunter. In regards to your story, however; This seems like a rather abrupt beginning to a story...the dream was well described; it flowed well, used simplistic yet ...