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Re: Hush
Wow. I can like totally relate. And first thing is first, don't change a thing. This was so full of emotion and feeling I am crying as I am writing ...
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Re: Love Lasts
I read this earllier but wasn't able to put up a review. So here it is. I like it. It was very interesting. The ghost /out of body expirence was ...
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Re: The Letters Chapter Two
OMG!!! ok so you like really need to finish this because I love this and so want to read more!!! You had me on the edge of my seat!!! The ...
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Re: Needs Title!
My Title suggestion: Gone! . Other than that you had a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Overall this poem was interesting. Keep Writing!!!! :D
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Re: The New Dawn; My Night.
I actually thought this wasn't cliche at all. It was cute. Everyone pretty much said what i was going to other than that great job. Keep Writing!! :) P.S. You ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
It didn't really live up to the title. I thought it would be something shocking. I wanted a WOW factor. but other than that. it was a pretty good. :P ...
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Re: The Space Between.
This is beautiful. I loved the imagery. This was very interesting. Everyone has said what I wanted to so, I'm not going to repeat. Other than that, great job!!! Keep ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: A Needle In The Vein and The Honest Truth
WHOA!!!!! This was mindblowing!!!!! I honestly wish I had epic poet skills like you!!! I didn't find anything particularly wrong with this, i was too into to care. Haha. Keep ...
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Re: You Don't Love Me
This was very interesting. I can totally relate. I still wanted some background on the characters though. Like the other times he said I love you. and i think they ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This is a really good poem. I could relate. I don't have enough time so I'm not going to get technical. But the one thing I did want to know ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Like You
This poem is interesting, it has a good message thats not really out there these days. The only problem I have is the flow is off. I don't know if ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Warning signs your date is broke
HAHA!!! I LOVE THIS!! It sorta reminds me of that movie "He's Just Not That Into You." Great Job, I give you props for thinking of this all on your ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Psyche
I am not really familiar with the story but now, I want to go read it. I loved how her tone was something you wouldn't normal hear from a person ...
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Re: Drive On, She Says
HAHA!! This was interesting. I laughed through the whole thing. The only think i did have a problem with was, the driver. I wanted to know more about him. Like ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: First Date
This was a cute, funny, and entertaining story. It was a great pick me up, becaue lord knows I needed it. Haha. Anyway, just those few nitpicks that was said ...
Apr 11, 2011
