PurpleHeart

Hey guys! Thanks for the positive reviews, i was kinda worried everyone would hate it, so im glad it wasn't terrible. I'll work on revising it so it flows better ...

Spectacular!! Nothing i'd criticize! I love the imagery and the adjectives you used... :)

Kat train... yeah, those last 3 lines were my signature. and i wasn't making excuses, i was, and still am, completely sure of my piece, and i was just telling ...

i wrote this on the spot in like 8 minutes... tear it up if you want to. i dont care.

You guys can't understand, so dont say you do. Matthew... this is really good. It is different, like you said, but i like it. There's nothing else i can really ...

Thanks guys! I'll fix the grammatical stuff when i get the chance, and i know a lot of it might seem confusing, and hard to read, but its a really ...

Haha thank you(: I'll revise it tomorrow... hope it'll help a little bit guys! ps. I Love You As Well.

Thanks for the comments guys! Matthew; I'm glad you liked it(:

Thanks JRaye! I'll try to explain the lines (i could see how they might be a little confusing) "The thing that's haunting Is me without you" What i mean by ...

Thanks everybody! I'm glad its not horrible - i wrote it as a spur of the moment thing late last night but i'm glad it turned out okay! I might ...

*Ahem* So So So So Gooood!!! I loved it before, but i love it 80% more now! I was scared that changing it at all would ruin it, or create ...

This is really good(: I like the rhyming scheme in this one a lot... it adds to it. I agree about the last line being changed, but i don't know ...

Thanks everybody! I'll try to work on building it up better, as well as the rhyming scheme - i wrote this several months ago so it was hard to revise ...

This is really good(: Whoever you wrote this for is one special girl.

Thanks for your opinions guys! Shadowprincess16 - ugh! im so tough on people mispelling stuff, and then i mispell a simple word like despair. haha(: I'll try and work on ...