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Matthew(: I know you wanted more a response, but when i posted that i was quickly running out of time... so i'll respond again. This is so incredible! i think ...

SilentRain - i really enjoyed this! It was romantic, and tragic, and somewhat cliche, but not necessarily in a bad way - and it wasn't sappy, which is refreshing. haha ...

I loved this. I agree, at some points, more emotion instead of action would've been appreciated, but overall this is incredible. Cutting is a struggle for me so i can ...

Hey Waterlillygirl! For just writing this on the spot - i think its excellent! It's not very long, so i dont think more of a background is necessary. If it ...

Milkncookies, I really liked this poem - the emotion was so evident throughout, it really made me feel what you were feeling. The overall critic i have would be (as ...

Hey! I really liked this piece - at first glance when i saw the Old English i thought it was going to be kind of corny, but after getting the ...

Hey PenguinAttack, i really liked your poem. There are lots of pieces that are left without being resolved, but that's one of my favorite parts. You did such a good ...

This is so goooooood!! I just joined YWS so i'm just getting a feel for the kinda things people write on here, and i've looked at a lot of writings ...

This is really good! I can relate to this a lot, so i know exactly where you're coming from and i think you've done a really good job of portraying ...