PsyLynx

I didn't get a lot of it....why you said some things, what they meant in the poem, you know. Sound to silence, light to dark (forgive me if my paraphasing ...

the language was boring. . .I don't know. That's my only real complaint. The story is, of course, sad. Spice it up, maybe. Make it sadder, make the work lonier, ...

spruce up the language. Still, it was pure in its....hmmm...write for a couple years, look at it, and you'll know what I mean. Pure means that you mean it. Later, ...

um, maybe you could have ended it in a joke, like "then God came down from the sky, and he gave me a bag of fritos, and he said, "though ...

This really, really reminded me of the stuff that I've been writing, hauntingly so. Lately, I've been trying to break out of it, because it's death to be satisfied, and...whenever ...

absolutely, completely incredible. Don't think I've ever written anything this good before. Utterly brilliant. I can't think of anyway to change or improve anything on this KEEP WRITING. It'll be ...

as a fellow sci-fi writer, I feel obligated to tell you a few things which I've learned. First off, one klick (if that is how it's spelled, I honestly don't ...

hey, it be good. I likes it, anyway. And yeah, it doe tell a story. And I appreciate the notice that it wasn't supposed to make sense; save me the ...

I liked the concept, I loved the idea of sleeping heaven....of your sleeping reality, but you didn't do anything with it, instead you just did this cliche love thing that ...

I...the language was pretty, the rhymes were pretty good, there were a few gramatical errors that only bug me because in daily speech, I use them, and that disconcerts me, ...