Prosithion

Fog hung on the streets of Sector 33. Big Ben sounded in the distance echoing through out the thin alleys, and brick covered buildings. Gideon walked down the barren street, ...

uhhh. This isn't really sci-fi. It seems like the narrator is a little... unstable. The way she is having an argument with the cell phone is weirrd. This was only ...

I'm a firm believer in global warming, but as oneeyedunicornhunter said, not everything that happens to the planet is caused by humans. Onto the actual review... Literature, like poetry, must ...

First off, I noticed that in the middle of the poem, you split a sentence up between stanzas. I must say that this makes for hard reading. Other then some ...

Often times in Sci-fi stories and novels, authors tend to use multiple stars about which planets will orbit. This is actually an impossibility. The gravity of twin suns would tear ...

Uh, first off, please get rid of the poll. I hate nothing more then a piece of literature, or poetry with a poll before it. This would work better, I ...

I must say, a well written and thought out poem. In a few areas, there seemed to be some rhythm issues, but those were far and few between. If you ...

Delightful poem. Not many people capitalize the beginning of every line, but I'm glad you did. I felt that although the rhyming seemed a bit forced in places, you kept ...

It's actually very interesting. When I first looked at it, I thought, "Uhoh, another short, short poem." However, when I read it, I actually like it, a lot. It's humorous, ...

The breeze tousled my hair and I inhaled the scent of pine cones. I think that you smell pine needles, not the cones. I don’t really think they have a ...

Jeffery scowled as he walked down the corridor. He hated the feel of his tight fitting, space station issued jumpsuit, it mad him miss the comfortable bagginess of his earth ...

It's very good, although I haven't much experience in love poems. Love came, and brought sorrow Too soon in her train Yet so sweet, tht tomorrow It was welcomed again ...

Overall, this was very good. Just remember in poetry, This first letter of every line should be capitalized. The rhythym was all over the place. Perhaps it was intentional, or ...

Wow, very depressing. I think it could do witha good bit of brightening up, and still get the point across. I think the planet would kill itself , after reading ...

When I read the first couple of lines, I thought to myself, "No, she didn't seriously write this." But, it suprised my. I actually found myself singing along to it. ...