PrinceofTerror

Hey new found friend Edelweiss, Prince of Terror here to give you nightmares. Kidding! Just here to give you a review. LOL. It took me three readings before I finally ...

This is the first FUN story that I'm going to review in YWS, and to be honest I find doing this as hard as if I'm running up a steep ...

Hi there. :) PrinceOfTerror here to review your short story. I love checking grammars, but I don't usually point it that much when doing reviews because I am more focused ...

Hello! I won't say much about technical stuff since there were already a couple of reviewers who did that, but I'm going to give you a review on what I ...

Hey Kitkat, this short story is goooood. No kidding. You made brought me back to my teenage years there and made me nostalgic about the girls I've been out with. ...

Hola! Here for a literary review. :) A short story for psychopath tale lovers. There are a lot of minor lapses in your literary work, but we'll get into that. ...

A dramatic short story indeed! The main review that I wanted to point out here is the shifting of verb tenses. It started with the past tense, and then suddenly ...

Nice essay about your view in life. :) I get the idea that most of the time people see us for whom we really are not; we are even misjudged ...

The story is very, very short. I thought this is more of a bed-time-story kind of tale; a story where a moral lesson is about to emerge, but I'm mistaken. ...

Cool! Good writing style by using letters to state your story. The story telling is good, present to past, past to present. There is no sequence, but for me, the ...

Bonjour my friend, I just finished reading your chapter 2, and this is good! Both first and second chapters are full of action, may it be in sword fight or ...

Bonjour mon ami, :p As promised, I am here to review your work so bear with me for a while. First of all, I want to say that your literary ...

Hello there! This is the first time that I've seen a poem with this kind of format. I mean the 'ambling' part. It's very creative of you to do that. ...

Friendship that lasts forever! First of all, I think that you posted this in the wrong category, I think this should be under the essay category or anything related to ...

Never, never, never give up! This is a good short story that occur (probably) during the medieval era. Every scene was well described, and every movement of the main character ...