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Re: Dream Sequence 3/5
Heya steamy, here I am back with another review for the next part of your sequence. There's not really a lot to say, because the piece is pretty short, but ...
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: A History Of Tommorow
Heya Pernicius, Pretzel here as requested from the review thread. So I am here for #11for11 and I would just like to suggest that you break up your chapters into ...
Nov 14, 2015 -
Re: Tuxedo Boys [I]
Heya Pompeii c: Here I am for a review for the contest that you are hosting:#11in11. I know that you wanted someone to review this, or rip this apart, so ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Hotel Serenity: Prologue
Heya tiger, Pretzel here for a review of your prologue. Basically, this is going to be done for the #11in11 challenge and plus you specifically requested this from me. Let's ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 1
Heya felistia, Pretzel here for a review, as requested. I have got to say,that I love how you started off with a map of this world that you are creating. ...
Nov 7, 2015 -
Re: 3 In proper english love means heart sickness
Heya Lorelie, I am so sorry that I haven't reviewed this, since you have specifically requested this from my thread. Let's jump right in though, shall we?? To start off ...
Oct 31, 2015 -
Re: Worlds Collide (Part 2)
Heya Meandbooks let's get straight into the review,shall we?? First Impressions I am pretty sure that you didn't convey the actual feeling that you have wanted to convey about Hermione ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 8
Heya LittleFox, Pretzel here for a Review on this lovely Review Day. I am sorry that I have never reviewed this before today, but I actually do remember reading this ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Burned 3.2
Heya Noelle, Pretzel here for a delayed review of this next chapter of your novel that I have been following. I see that you haven't posted another chapter in a ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 2.2
Heya Wolfe, Pretzel here for a review of the next chapter of your novel. I know that when I will be writing this, you will be on a break, but ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 2/5
Heya steam, Pretzel here as promised to review this next part of your series for this lovely October Review Day. I know that many people have praised you for this, ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 2 (Ever-changing Title)
Heya Timmy, this is Pretzel here for another review of your novel(aka the next rough chapter) on this lovely October review day. I haven't read this since last review day, ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: The Melding - Chapter One
Heya sugar. I promised to come and review your newest LMS project/novel and here I am, this October Review Day starting from the beginning, or Chapter 1. I will try ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Missing
Heya Mikalya and welcome to YWS. I will try to review this poem for you, but I won't try to use specific quotes, just generalize the comments that I have ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 2.1
Heya Wolfe, here I am trying to review the next chapter of your novel. I reviewed the first one quite a while ago, so I am ready to continue today ...
Oct 12, 2015