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Re: Best Friends Forever
Heya, this is Pretzel here and if you are wondering why I am reviewing your work, or how I even found it I need to finish a review about "friendship" ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 4/5
Hello steam. Here I am to review part 4 of your series. I'm so sorry again, that I'm being kind of late, but I was busy with other requested reviews ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Damage (Ch. 2)
Heya Carlito. I'm sorry that I've been kind of slacking on keeping my review promises, but I just wanted to let you know that I do intend to fully review ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Worlds Collide (Part 4)
Heya Mea. Sorry that I'm always so late in things like this, I just forget but that's ok,at least I'm here now right? Anyways, as I noticed in a comment ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Burned 4.1
Heya Noelle. And once again,this piece is left in the green room for such a long time. Never fear, for Pretzel is here! Anyways,let's begin,shall we? I really liked how ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: What It Is to Be Özlem
Hello darling Lavvie. Here I am for Review Day, which you are the captain of my team.
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: Burned 3.3
Heya Noelle, I have so excited that we have finally gotten into the action, and this plot-twist was so fit-in. It's just all so fast-paced, so I personally would spread ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: Those Three Words
I love Rydia,. Hello! So you asked me to review this for you on my thread and so here I am. First of all, this concept, where the idea came ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.0, Rewritten]
Hello Lightsong, Pretzel here for a review of this prologue of your novel. I just wanted to let you know that I usually go very in-depth with my reviews, so ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: ending tomorrow
Hello Night. Before I start I have to say that I really really enjoyed this poem. I feel like you made a good interpretation and description of what this type ...
Dec 21, 2015 -
Re: The Hidden World of Sleep and Stress
Hello. ~ So I wanted to start off with thank you so much for writing this article, and expressing what we all experience during those high school years. This article ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Worlds Collide (Part 3)
Heya Mea, sorry that I am so late on this train of finishing reviewing your short series, but at least I'm here now. I will try to finish the 4th ...
Dec 13, 2015 -
Re: Heart Failure
Welcome to yewis. You need to work on your grammar and punctuation. The first thing that I noticed, is that you need a space between a period and the beginning ...
Dec 11, 2015 -
Re: From the Journal of Ananias Dare
Hello this is Pretzel here to review your historical fiction piece. I would just like to let you know to be warned because my reviews usually go very in-depth with ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1: An Ordinary Day
Heya HAPPY REVIEW DAY! Anyways, let's get started, shall we? I really like and enjoyed reading the idea of a mythical creature being in someone's head, like a voice in ...
Nov 28, 2015