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Re: CH. 1. Broken
Heya BreeTaylor, So I will probably be working on this review for a while just because of technical difficulties and such. I usually don't do intros just dive in with ...
Mar 7, 2015 -
Re: Like Clockwork
Heya steam, so even though I see that you have a lot of reviewers here, I promised you,dear friend, that I would review your work too. This was such a ...
Mar 4, 2015 -
Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 4
Heya, Little Fox! Pretzelsing here for a review as promised. So first of all, I have to say that this was an interesting chapter, in the way that I like ...
Mar 4, 2015 -
Re: Inspire (Part 1)
Heya Wolfare, Pretzelsing here for a review,Let's get down to business: My everlasting well of ideas has run dry. That is kind of ironic because the everlasting should always have ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 3
Heya LittleFox, Pretzelsing here for a review as I promised you(BTW thanks for tagging me) I noticed that you changed this chapter a lot from the unedited version and I ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Lady- Chapter Four
Heya ehobby, Pretzelsing here for a review as promised through the PM :) Okay so you didn't really develop the characters that much here because you told us more about ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: The Story of Us Chapter Three: Willie
Heya this is pretzelsing here for a review. I have been following your novel and if I could then would like to request that you PM me the next installments ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: ​Little Sister Chapter 8 (unedited)
Heya pretzelsing here for a review as you requested, As you know, I am jumping in the middle of this story so I don't really know what happened before.I will ...
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Kaori's Treaty~Prolouge
Heya pretzelsing here for a review as you requested from my thread, I really have no excuse to be late but I hope that this helps you! First of all ...
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Girlfriends, Boyfriends, and Younger Brothers
Heya PickledChrissy, pretzelsing is here for the review that I promised for you. First of all I have to say that I really liked this because it was funny and ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One- Chapter 5.2
Heya ThereseCricket, pretzelsing here for a review (I owe you one :D ) First of all I was so excited to see that you have posted another chapter of your ...
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: Weeping Willow (Prologue)
Heya pretzelsing, I have to tell you that I truly enjoyed this story because it was just so mysterious. I am almost attracted to it and I assume that the ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Jumping the Fence, Part 2
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, and I have to tell you before I start that I have read the first part this short story..Anyways,let's get down to business, shall ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Jumping the Fence, Part 1
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I thought this story was very intriguing to say at the very least :) Okay, so honestly you didn't really develop the character, but ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Aiga: The Light Within Tears (Prologue)
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that although this piece is dark and mysterious,I loved it!I don't think that this was long,it is a good sized ...
Feb 22, 2015