Prakash

Hi, Here, I am for review. First, I shall go with the nitpicks: Your first chapter is a single massive paragraph. It would definitely put off your readers. Some readers ...

Hi, I am here for review. Great message! We are a kind that lacks compassion. It's true. I will take this to my heart. Now, I can be the change. ...

Hi, I shall deal first with the nitpicks, later I can drown you in praises. "I can feel the air growing tenser You can use the simple form instead of ...

A great job! You have brought out finely in words the true mentality of the acid-attacker on girls. He is the brute who believe the true love lies on beauty. ...

Hi, Here I am for review. First the nitpicks: "I realized that my feet was on his desk." The word 'Feet' is a plural. 'Were' instead of 'Was' "Only difference ...

Hah, yet another crazy theme! I think it's really the craziest of all. But, I am still trying to get the meaning out of it. The time fleets. What belongs ...

Hi! I am here to review. First of all, let me deal with the technical aspects: 1. All your paragraphs were massive. It would put off your readers. Try to ...

The story is interesting, but the climax is not clear. Is he her brother? I assume he is. If so, their sibling relationship is cute. I don't find more grammatical ...

Here I am again! “I could try and climb down the cliff and then swim across. No 'and' use 'to' instead. "I could jump into the river and swim across, ...

You got a good start for a novel. It renders a struggle of a girl for freedom, but the cause for the struggle and her dad's inebriated state and violent ...

Haha, Very funny, I was curious to know the girl's reaction, after her mother's story of her first love. So far, I feel bad for the innocent girl, whose high ...

I really like your theme. I can feel the pride of hearing-impaired people and how they feel about being the attention of others in your stanzas. Also, I feel 'I ...

Nothing seemed to be interesting in the article. You had just criticized the cinema for its bad influence on people. Most of the sentence constructions were totally wrong. For example: ...

The way you put up your idea into work seemed to be confusing. It would definitely put off your readers. I don't understand the kinda situation the main character was ...

Hi Emmaki! I really love your work. Your narration was brilliant and I got engrossed in the story. The emotions were streaming out very well like a fountain in your ...