Poopsie

well if you don't like it can you at least tell us why instead of just saying its bad? That's the point of reviews, if you think something is terrible, ...

Mmmmm..... Deep

Pretty good poem ^^ I like the theme you're trying to get across Yo transporter, top this poem, I friggin dare ya -3-

woooo, teen years ftw -3- (>-_-)> A+ For You

thank you :D

who wants a drunk poem on the spotlight :) lets do it!

XD XD DRAK something tells me you don't live in the U.S XD XD

thanks so much :)

Thank you for the review. I did intentionally leave the sentences open, but I was meaning to capitalize the start of each phrase so.... gonna have to fix that :). ...

Yes, yes it is your place to call him out. A father's duty is to show his child love, affection, and to help prepare his child for the world ahead ...

I wanna get this straight, this poem is, in your perspective, an abused child waiting for god, or someone, to help her/ stop her abusive father?

we put on a mask to disguise our true feelings and personality in order not to be criticized by a mostly immature and insecure public. My mask got to small ...

lets put this on the spotlight shall we?

*gasp* its a double negative

a beautiful contrast between the people we are on the outside to the people we are on the inside.