- Re: Tryal's Curse 1.1 Sep 3, 2015
- Re: Tryal's Curse 1.1 Sep 3, 2015
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Re: The Morning Song(critism of life)
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Aug 30, 2015
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Re: Let it Go (Mount Doom Beats)
YOU HAVEN'T SEEN LoTR? GO WATCH ALL THE FILMS NOW I DEMAND IT
Aug 19, 2015 -
Re: reach out
Thank you! c:
Aug 16, 2015 -
Re: School
I'm glad; I think it should. This is an alert marked !doubleexclamations! Dear Author kindly gracious writer person, This is to inform you that correct grammar usage has been observed ...
Aug 16, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.2
Hm. I'll work on making the relationship bit a tad clearer. As far as the bond between Malkolm and Elborn goes, Malkolm is Elborn's newly-appointed Ixister, so the bond between ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.2
*parts 1.1 and 1.3, whoops.
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.1
Malkolm is pretty young for an Ixister. I haven't decided on his age myself, so let's just say he's somewhere in his late teens. Thanks for reviewing~
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.2
Malkolm is a meanie. I might be the only person who actually likes him. XD And Malkolm doesn't really classify under either protagonist or antagonist: he'll be wavering between the ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.2
Thanks for the review! I think this chapter part turned out slow because the last chapter was leading up to this, but I'll try to incorporate some more action in ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.2
Thank you for your thoughts! I've introduced Elborn as the Meka in part one of this chapter, and because it was Elborn whose face the door hit I think it's ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Elementárni ~ 1.1 *adjusted*
Aww, thank you!
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: Elementárni ~ 1.1 *adjusted*
Aww, thank you!
Jul 23, 2015