Pompadour

Thank you so much! I suppose I should've given a bit of an intro in the summary, but Reine's experiencing psychological problems and her brother's death just pushed her off ...

I think I'll give something like that a fling. But I don't really want to change the perspective, seeing as I'd have to scrap the whole poem. I'm really quite ...

Thank you! I'm not really all that good, but I'm trying. =) I've written quite a lot of poetry, but haven't posted much here. You can find some in my ...

Thank you so much for the pointers! They helped me edit the poem, which I have done now. I brought the changes to this version as above and I hope ...

Thanks for the review! It really helped. I'd never really edited this poem after I typed it a couple of years ago, but I've finally gotten down to it. And ...

Thanks! I'll definitely be reviewing the end. I felt it was a little off too when I wrote the thing, but at the time I thought it couldn't be helped. ...

Thank you! I assure you I wasn't under any influence ( unless you call insanity an influence!) but I was kinda down that day. I wrote this to cheer myself ...

Thanks! I know I was rude (sorry), I meant to be that way. See, I was trying to create this image of a blunt and forthright narrator, since I feel ...

Gosh, I never meant it like that! Charmy, listen up, if you want to write, go ahead and do it! Don't let one try bring you down. Everybody starts off ...

Thank you for the review! ~Pompadour

Thanks for the review! ~Pompadour

Thanks! Yep, I've read The Infernal Devices and I really liked it, but I haven't started on The Mortal Instruments.

Thanks! Yeah, I intended for it to be free verse, but those last two verses just sort of "wrote themselves". I knew it's sort of weird from a structured point ...

Reading this, I just couldn't help but feel really touched. The way you described everything...and the fact that it's really true... It just felt so honest, so simply put and ...

Yeah, when I wrote this, I thought it was kinda weird of me to. Do. This. I'll definitely be removing the periods then. Also, I wasn't completely intending on merely ...