Pompadour

I don't trust Captain Wyrnson. At all. Another dialogue-heavy chapter. I like how you incorporated snippets of action amidst the dialogue, but I'd like something more to crunch on. Just ...

Hi, love. This is my favourite chapter thus far. It's well-balanced, the pacing is good and I like how you've worked the transitions in without bogging any of the scenes ...

And I'm baaack~ Well, that was an abrupt beginning. It was definitely a cut-off from where we left our last chapter and I'm longing to find out what went on ...

Yo~ Let's get straight to business. One of the things that I've noticed is that Lindon, Alexander and Nikolas are very easily confusable. Lindon's the Unseelie Court's Prince, Nikolas is ...

Hi there. Pomp here for a Review Day review~ I'm on a phone so please excuse any typos/odd letterage. That said, I'll make this short. This was an absolutely delicious ...

Yo. Pomp here for a RD review~ I've skimmed through the first chapter, but I don't really have a solid handle on how things're going about here; forgive me for ...

Hi there. A late welcome to YWS! I'll make this review quick. I think what makes this chapter confusing is that it acts largely as a teaser instead of establishing ...

Hi. WHY HAVE YOU NOT BEEN UPDATING THIS? I do hope you're still writing this. A mob of very angry YWSers will be ambushing your wall otherwise and no one ...

Hi there. Here for a quick review! I greatly enjoyed reading this. The premise is interesting and the piece is well-written; it's also symbolic of the blind wanderings of childhood, ...

Hey, Beanie! Been meaning to review this for a while. I'll make this quick. I love your beginning. It flows very effortlessly and the immediacy of the scene itself is ...

Hey, Writer! Pomp here for a quick review. It's late, so I apologise if I come off as incoherent in any way. Welcome to YWS! Before I begin, this is ...

Hey there. I liked reading this. It was mostly well-written, but I'd suggest that you break the chapter down and post it in one or more pieces--5000+ words is a ...

Hi. Here to review as requested~ (So sorry for the lateness.) I'll make this quick. You have a very concrete idea here; it's simple, it's sweet, and it's prosaic. What's ...

Yo, Carina. I adore this; it's really pretty and the poem in itself is pretty--it's like a cool visual journey and it's one of those things I wouldn't mind taping ...

Moony! Gonna make this quick. I don't have much to say about this chapter that hasn't been said already, but I think part of the problem lies in that it ...