Pompadour

Hello! Back again~ Happy Review Day! But then breath filled my chest, and light flooded my eyes, and everything was okay... not. This felt awkward, out of place and just ...

I'M HERE FIRST, YAY. The skyscrapers reached upwards, almost as if they were trying to touch the cotton clouds themselves. You've already used the cotton metaphor in the previous sentence, ...

Hallo, Flame. ^_^ Pompadour here to review for you! Alright, so I really liked reading this. The words honestly seemed to whisper to me, except they sounded as if they ...

*cocks hat* Mess, Night. G'day. Lemme cover the nit-picks and other description-related shtuffs real quick and then we'll talk about the chapter, okay? The warm evening air was comforting after ...

Hola, Deanie~ Moi is back! There tall skyscrapers that reached above our heads, shining in the dazzling silver. I read through this once. Then twice. And even then I doubt ...

Yo, Night~ Rudigo Sol here to represent! Anywhoo, lemme cover the general nitpicking and critique the detail a bit before I move on with the story, okay? You know things ...

Hola, Jakey! *attacks innocent looking poem* Hrm, this is a tough one to review, mostly because it's pretty short and simplistic. There's also the fact that I stink at reviewing ...

Hey, Al! I'm back~ I swear I didn't forget this, honest! I've just been *insert long and useless excuse here* Happy Review Day! Your first language is Serbian? That's wicked! ...

Shenzhen, yes! O_O Yes, yes, yes! I've been waiting for this for so, so long--I even searched it up 'cause I was impatient to get here. Apparently it's pretty close ...

Hey, Alchemist! Pompadour here to review as requested~ I'm so, so sorry for the lateness! I thought I'd start with the prologue before critiquing all your chapters, since I find ...

Finally here.

You wrote something, yay! Okay, so I love how amazingly simple but deep this is. Your imagery is gorgeous--ink-stained imagery is always gorgeous, innit?--and I also like how you've compared ...

Hey there! I'm going to echo Wolf here and say: Welcome to YWS! I'll just take a quick run through the entire piece first, so hang tight~ He wares a ...

Yo, Tim! Here to review for you~ (Even though the bloodbath's already over, but reviews are nice, yes?) Lemme get rid of all these nit-picks real fast and then we ...

Heya, Buggie! So I saw this a really long time ago, and actually read the first chapter and stalked the updates--don't look at me like that--but never actually reviewed. This ...