Polkadots

I don't really understand this piece. I can't distinguish any of the cats from each other. There's no detail about them to help me remember them seperately. Hunter was only ...

This is a really cute story. It reminds me of a book on mice I read a while back ago. Anyways, I have a few suggestions. The way your wrote ...

I think your visuals are amazing. I noticed a few, miniscule most likely typos like "site" instead of "sight" and a few "It's" uncapitilised, but other than that I thought ...

I'll review your work, but it's a rule that before posting a story you must review atleast two works and then keep the ratio of reviews to posted stories 2:1. ...

I agree, this blurb is deeply lacking. Add something to it and show the reader. If you meant this to be a prologue than it ruins the whole suspense element ...

Hello, Paw! :D I told you I'd read more so here I am. I noticed a few mistakes I'll point them out in bold once again: CHAPTER 2 I stopped ...

I liked it. The idea of a personal lamp is interesting. The story makes the reader curious. Does she live in the this "dark, earthy" place? Why? The only problem ...

This was a nice piece. They're were only a few errors, which I changed and marked in bold: CHAPTER 1 I could not believe it! Summer was almost at its ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. This is a really nice site and everyone is nice and helpful. I'm glad you joined. Anyways now to ...

I noticed a few errors in grammar: The strawberry bushes were practically torn from the ground and the skinny trees were bent and touching the ground. I crawled from the ...

I read the first chapter in the store of Twilight and the first chapter of New Moon on her website. I'm probably going to read it soon (it's checked out ...

I found this piece to be interesting. Your protagonists is quirky and her tone is believable and upbeat. However, it's a bit of a info-dump. I don't really need to ...

I agree with the previous reviewers, you have a knack for stringing words together to create stunning imagery. I couldn't really find anything wrong. Only if it turns into a ...

I agree with the readers above me. Try to space it out so it's easier to read and tell less and show more. This piece seemed a bit like an ...

All had long swords in their hands and all looked liked they knew how to use them. This messed up the flow a bit. If someone had a longsword it ...