Thanks for all the CC, it's very much appreciated!!
This is still in the editing process. In fact, the second piece is my second draft, and I'm probably going to dump it, anyway. I need some time to think of a more creative way to write it, I think...
Thanks for the input!
And, sorry for the spacing error on the second piece. I was going too fast, and forgot to space it properly!!
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