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Re: The Devil Has Dimples (Prologue + Chapter 1)
Hey Cynara!!! So glad u did this, even though it took me so long to read. Sorry. Still, gotta say that I loved it!!!!!!! It is dramatic, but thats what ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (15... and a half?)
Oh my gah!!! This story's awsome!!! Cynara told me about it and I read it all in one sit. I just wanted to read more. The only thing, but this ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Summer of Love -- Preface
Hi! Welcome to YWS! Ok, so the review: I have to agree with Tayla. It was too short, even for a preface. I would have liked to see more. As ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Little Macey
Hey, I just wanted to say that I really liked it. I loved the idea of a monster in the closet. I also thought how you mentioned that Sarah, the ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Chances, chances - 1
Hey, reekmeluff? I read your story. No offence, but that was so long. Anyways, I'm just gonna give you some pointers. Sweetie, you gotta give readers a reason to actually ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Bitten (Chapter Two)
Ooh, so Wesley's the vamp. Should have guessed. Anyways onto the review! You have typos, but I'm not a nitpicker so I won't point them out. Your redacting was a ...
Jul 25, 2009 -
Re: An Ode to Google
Hah. Funny. This is very creative and witty and really enjoyable. It made me chuckle. You really do have a talent. . . . It reminds me of an ode ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: A Conspiracy
Hey Socks! I completely agree with wookie. About time you posted it!! (angry smiley face) You know haw long we've been waiting for it? So, I guess Cynara covered the ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: A Room Full of Peanuts
Hi Buddy. I really liked the setting and how you wrote the thing, plus the character Paige. The story, for me was just odd and weird and nice at the ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: Round Like The Moon (6)
Hi Cynara. The story was awesome, as always. Just now I noticed that the chapter was kinda long, which is good 'cuz I couldn't stop reading and it didn't feel ...
Jul 21, 2009 -
Re: A conspiracy
HI BLUE!!!! You made hope's perkiness and silliness shine trough. (its a good thing hope) Anyways I just wanted to say that I really liked it and am dying for ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Round Like The Moon (3)
Hi. Cynara. Read it. Loved it.There are a just a few things Ill point out. I got confused a little in the dialog. You could have explained who was talking ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Bitten (chapter one)
Hi! Socks here. Just wanted to say that I really liked it. I thought it had like an 19th century aura with the forced marriage and all. Plus when Wesly ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Round Like The Moon (2)
Hi Cynara. HOW COULD YOU HAVE NOT SHOWN THIS TO ME??????? Anyways love love loved it. I think even more than the first storie. Seriously, its really good. Its catchy ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Book of Raziel - Chapter 1
hI. i didnt read the prologue so maybe thats why i was a bit lost ( I couldnt figure out where was she, where was she going or why so ...
Jun 22, 2009