PoeticGlow

I like this poem a lot, it's simple, it's direct and blunt, but it screams with emotion! Good flow and good rhyme scheme as well! I enjoyed how you concluded ...

Hello there! This is a pretty good poem! Good flow, good rhyme scheme, and good overall message! "So she retreats into her mind And builds her castle in the sky ...

Bravo, writerwithacause! At first glance, I didn't realize this was a love poem! I had to get down to the 2nd stanza for that realization! And speaking of the 2nd ...

This is a nice, heartfelt poem! This actually reminds me of a former friend of mine! To tell you the truth, you've inspired me slightly to perhaps write an apology-like ...

I like this! The use of old English makes this piece very unique; it's certainly something you don't see everyday today! I enjoyed the last three lines in particular! I ...

Good work, amandajo! As a few members already suggested, I would fix the whole mess of a "textblock" you got going on, and change them into separate stanzas! :) It ...

This is a very nice poem! Ha, it's funny, how boredom tends to bring out the best in us writers! I really liked the whole rhyme scheme you have going! ...

This is truly sad, but it's very beautiful at the same time. It's always so hard to lose someone :( My only suggestion is this: "i saw her smile i ...

I love this! Good use of rhyme and diction! This poem certainly has a "vampire" kind of feel to it! "The heart skipping; sealing the bond. Releasing souls; forever fond." ...

Very well done, Bolshevik! I like the format, rhyming, and imagery of this poem! The dialogue does indeed give this poem a rich, powerful effect! This was my favorite part: ...

This is a powerful work of art, StoryWeaver13! I think your title is most appropriate and suits this poem very well! I particularly like these lines: "Will no one, not ...

I agree with 322sivart, this is a very well expressed poem, but the punctuation errors unfortunately take some of the shine off of this piece. Perhaps capitalize the rest of ...

I like the shift from happiness to sadness, I quite honestly didn't expect that! At first glance, I expected this poem to be about more happiness than sad. It's indeed ...

This is a cute little poem! It reminds me of childhood innocence; makes me miss my own childhood, actually! A brief suggestion though: "Did you laugh? Did you laugh ?" ...

Vague or not, I think this is actually a nice little piece! The length is appropriate, and the flow is decent! I like your conclusion, as well; very bluntly stated, ...