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Re: May 23
Hey, When I first read the title, I didn't expect much of anything (as in, I didn't expect what I read). I don't know if this is just a random ...
May 24, 2020 -
Re: Snow White
Hey! Wow! This is such a wonderful take on the story of Snow White. Such a different, yet tasteful, look on her story. The way you describe things bring me ...
May 7, 2020 -
Re: Fairytales Rewritten ~ The Beast
hello :) I would first like to start of by saying, really great concept! You are so right, no one really looks through the villain's eyes. It's actually quite sad, ...
Apr 14, 2020 -
Re: Help Me
Hey :) Heartbreak is one of the hardest things to deal with, so I feel your pain. You always feel so happy and something has to ruin it (at least ...
Apr 13, 2020 -
Re: Beauty and Death---Chapter Three
Here to review your work! Although I don't know much about what is happening, it's very detailed. You did great work with using descriptive words to help the reader have ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Scarecrow: Origins
Hello! Here to review! I just want to say, you really had me interested. I mean I know that's the point of a story, sometimes, however, people aren't always great ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Statement of Purpose
Hello! Here to review! I just want to say, you really had me interested. I mean I know that is kind of the point for something like this to show ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: See Me
Hiiiii @AndName Here to review your amazing work :) Okay so first I want to start off with saying shoot. You are an amazing writer, like truly amazing. I can ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: My Heart's Four Seasons
Hello! Here to review your work! I would like to start of by saying this is really beautiful. What a strongly worded poem. What I mean by that is you ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 31
Hello! Here to review your work. I am you know reading in the middle of your story. I mean I know lots of people do that but I just wanna ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 18
Hello! Here to review your work. I am you know reading in the middle of your story. I mean I know lots of people do that but I just wanna ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Sognore 5.0
Hello! Here to review your work. I am you know reading in the middle of your story. I mean I know lots of people do that but I just wanna ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Intangible Part 6-Little Girls and Near-Death Experiences
Hello! Here to review your work. I am you know reading in the middle of your story. I mean I know lots of people do that but I just wanna ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Monster by Maria Roundoff
Hello! Here to review your work! I just want to say this story is full of so much. I can't tell who the monster is in this because the man ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Randy
Hello! Here to review your work! I love that is is a short story, which actually made me want to read it more. How it started off was amazing because ...
Feb 23, 2020