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Re: A Deadly Game
I really like it. I think that you had no mistakes in grammar, but you are always a true writter. (I would guess, based on this story.)Great job!!! ~ PIxie2~
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Spring
I love the title so much and i love that. The title gives me an idea of the passage. Great job. ~pixie2~
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hopes
Also I loved your name for the poem iot really gave me goosebups, Thats why I wnated to read it! ~Pixie2~
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hopes
The first line I think had something spelled wrong but, overall it was great. I loved it so much! ~ Pixie2~
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Friends, Dreams and Training (Chapter 2)
Very exaustic, but it kept me up! It was interesting and seemed real, or is it real? I loved it an I hope that other people will enjoy it as ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Colorful
It made me want to be in the setting! Great job and keep up the good work! ~Pixie2~
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Ternimal 'Sease
love the idea of the passage but, next time hold off on the Mommys! ~Pixie2~
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: My fly
this is my poem. Do you like it. I know its not the best but. I think It is ok. ~Pixie2~
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Turn Me Down
you are very talented. Awsome. ~Pixie2~
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Jazz Minne
thanks guys. Actually this really did help me figure out the idea of this passage. Next time I write a short story I will be sure to prepare to look ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Ocean
that was long. - Pixie2
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to American Idol
That is one of the best poems I have ever read!!! Keep it up you ere very telented. You should be a famous writer. Who does'nt like you!!! -Pixie2 Ps. ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: The cave neer the baseball feild.
awsome story Pixie2!
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Jazz Minne
that is my story. Do you like it? -Pixie2 Hi Milkncookies!
Mar 31, 2011