Pirategreengirl

thanks a lot for your review :) i'll make sure to check up on the rhyme here.

Thanks a lot for your review. I appreciate the time you took to delve deep into my work. Thanks for the constructive critique, I'll keep working to make my writing ...

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Hi there! First of all wow! I love the grappling emotions in your work and the opening which creates a mysterious and eerie tone for the entire story. The fact ...

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Wow! I absolutely love these kind of poems. Short, sweet but has a very deep meaning underneath. According to me, it brought an imagery of a drizzle in a garden ...

Hi Lim! Thanks a lot for your review, it encourages me to write more. Answers to your questions: 1. I meant it metaphorically, where the devil (a controlling person) is ...

Thanks for your kind words.

@Youbeaucupid thanks a bunch for your review and constructive criticism, I found it very helpful! Thanks for your patience and time I appreciate it a lot! I'll make sure to ...

This is a very heartfelt and relatable piece. Your poem capture this poignant feeling of love and loss. The repetition you used here, it adds a rhythm which puts the ...

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The imagery of your poem is literally breath taking. The theme of feeling exhausted in one's own skin is deeply relatable. I love the structure of your poem and the ...

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