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Hi :D This is such sad story :( really well written though, I can't shred it to pieces- its too good for that! ;) “Ian I can’t get down,” Kali ...

Hi :D I thought this was amazingly written, you certainly have talent. At first, I was not that keen on the way the perspectives jumped around but as I read ...

Hi again :) I love the romantic moments between Jack and Callie- I think you described it brilliantly and it was great to show Callie's confusion in her thoughts to ...

Hi :D I like the storyline here and the way you introduce the main character, the opening paragraph was a good way of starting the story :) I did notice ...

I like where this story is going! The sudden panic I thought you described really well and I'm very interested as to who Gabby is :D I could feel the ...

Hi again :D I like how you have continued! I found the arguments between her and her brother really funny, anyone who has a sibling will definitely be completely familiar ...

Hi! :D This was really good and there are so many brilliant reviews before me that I'm afraid I won't be of much help, I'll do my best though! I ...

Hi :) You were right, this is definitely a story that makes you think, I don't know if 'enjoyed' is the right word to use- but I thought this was ...

Hi :D This is a really powerful prologue! I think this is a great beginning to have, I've already got a million questions about what will come next :) As ...

Hi :D I think this is a good beginning, I like how you jump straight in with the dialogue and the drama of the situation really pulls the reader in, ...

Hi :D I really enjoyed how this was written, it all seemed really friendly and informal from how the main character talks. I hope you do continue with this! Allie’s ...

Hi :) this is very powerful, romantic but very sad :( Its short, but I think it works at around this size in just showing the horror of losing the ...

I really enjoyed this story!! I really do hope you continue, I think you have a good starting point here and there's a funny twist to it all that made ...

Hi :D I think this is a good beginning I love the characters names too :) Its a really lovely story so far, I hope you write more! And believe ...

Hi! :) I'm pretty sure I have read the prologue to this with you under a slightly different name, I like how you have continued! This is a good piece ...