Pippiedooda

Hi I'm surprised no-one has reviewed this! I found it very interesting, at first a little confusing but that just made me want to read more :P- I like how ...

Hi I found this letter very well done! :) It was nicely refreshing to read something in a different style and I think if you wanted you could develop it ...

This was a good way of grabbing the readers attention, I loved the way you dived straight in! :) A couple of things I think can be improved upon are: ...

Hi :) I like the plotline for this story, you managed to reveal more about the main charcter without telling the reader directly which was good and the whole piece ...

Hi there :) so far I really like this! I thought it was very well written and I love your use of description- instantly I hate Ella's parents and feel ...

I like your story, you've managed to keep it effective and powerful despite being so short- good job! :D I found it really hard to think of any possible names ...

Hi :) I liked your story- it was different to anything I have read before and interesting, I like how it unfolded. I think that you should break this up ...

Hi you shouldn't be worried, this is really good! I'm really curious and I like the twist on fairies and animal parts, I hope you write more :) I couldn't ...

Hi me again :D thanks for your PM! I liked this chapter too, it gave a littel more detail on the characters and again I really felt for Amanda! Heres ...

This was a good start- I like the dialogue at the beginning, its a nice way of jumping into the story and introducing the main character. Luciano is such a ...

Good begginning! I like the sound of your story, I feel so bad for Amanda! I've got a few comments on things that I think could be improved- just stuff ...

Wow- that was great. It was so sad and I really can't think of anything much to change, the only thing that I would do differnetly would be to replace ...

I think it is definitely worth carrying on! :D I really like how you have set the scene and I think that this is a good beginning to a story. ...

This is a good begginning, you've dropped enough hints at unusual things to keep me wanting to read more! :) I've got a few comments on possible improvement: I groped ...

Hi, I'm liking this part too! :D The pace is good and I'm definetly intrigued as to what is going on- I've got a couple of comments on possible improvement: ...