Pippiedooda

Hi :D This sounds pretty perfect already! I'm sure you'll do well in the contest :) I knew the devil, and he wouldn't likely be making exceptions. I think this ...

Yay first review! :D I loved the way this was written and the twist at the end- there really isn't much that can be improved upon that I can see ...

Hi me again :) I'm really enjoying your story so far, I like how you reveal bits of information throughout this chapter but don't dump it all in one go. ...

This is really touching, a very well written piece. I love how emotional the story is, you've got talent! :) She did not care, she did not care about anything, ...

Hi :) I thought this was good! Its a nice twist on the classic battle stuff, I think you'll do well in the contest :D I meet him on the ...

Hi there :D I love the twist to this story! I like the idea and I really enjoyed how you have written this- there's not much editing at all that ...

Oooooh I am really liking this idea!! I really think you should continue, its a very interesting concept to base a story on and I would love to read it ...

Hi good story! I'm liking it so far, is this the beginning? I think it would work well if it is because you could do all the explaining later :D ...

Hooking wise its great :D And I am definetly interested in reading more!! You've written this really well, I had to look very closely to find anything that I thought ...

Hi :) I loved the idea of writing a story on penguins! The whole idea aswell of frogs and fairies was very interesting, its the sort of story I can ...

Hey there :D This was great! I found your story really touching and I loved the ending- to be honest I can find not alot at all that could be ...

I've gotta say I loved this! I never write a review without giving some criticisms but I actually can't find any for this :shock: Really original, I think that every ...

Hi :) I'm intrigued as to what happens next- nice cliffhanger at the end. You've got quite a few punctuation mistakes, so I'll go through each paragraph and try to ...

Hi there :) I enjoyed this piece, I loved the humour in the conversation and thought overall it was quite well written- I'm glad your continueing with it as I ...

Hi first of all awwwwwww! :D Really sweet story! I loved your use of decription and I thought this piece was very nicely written. On with the review :) Possible ...