Piper

May I start with..Oh My Gosh. I had to take a minute to breathe before writing this review. It's a very, very interesting story line and very well written. I ...

I have to say, I love this story. It's imaginative and cute and you're able to suprise me and keep me on my toes wanting more. One thing though. “Well, ...

Hey, I'm Sakura and I'll be your reviewer today. Lets get started, shall we? I can't say I like the way you spaced your lines, it feels kind of choppy, ...

I call you dad because I'm supposed to but you've never been a father to me. I love you because I was told to, but you never showed any love ...

This made me laugh, I was like "naughty Crimsona". You're very creative, you come up with these fun, silly, great, unique idea's and turn them into entertainment for the rest ...

Aww, I wrote when I was little too. I folded printer paper and stapled it, and I used them to write about a paragraphs worth of story in them. I ...

This happends to be the most amazing poem I have ever read in my entire life. Your imagry is amazing, this is my favorite part Today I(amazing) glanced(breath-taking) at a ...

This was great, Persephone. Great imagry, I can see it like it's real. You have impecable word choice, by the way. She's commiting suicide, right? Because hemlock and arsnic are ...

Smooth stuff, Hairy stuff Kinda-sorta scary stuff Real stuff, Fake stuff A book on "How to Make- Stuff" Good stuff, Bad stuff It'll-kinda-make-you-sad stuff(take out the kinda, it'll flow better) ...

Hello, my friend, here for a review! -hugs Olivia before starting- I know you love alliteration, I was laughing the entire time I read this...you and your butt puns. I ...

This was so sad, I'm on the verge of tears right now, just to let you know. I feel so bad for the kid, it reminds me of a book ...

This was an interesting idea, and I love the wordchoice. You made some grammer errors and in doesn't flow properly at all times, but that was already talked about in ...

I have to say, I really love this. I guess I need to keep a look out for Jesus now...I love Hettie's childhood innocence, and saying she got the picture ...

Aww, this was sweet and sad at the same time. I love the way a grown woman still dreams like a child. Everyone needs a neverland, huh? I feel for ...

Hey Lily! Loved this poem, very unique. I agree that the "crooked teeth tapping against mine" is almost.....creepy. I also didn't really like the part "Crossing my heart, I hope ...