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Re: I:The Room
Can I just say something? Wow. This was amazing. It was short and beautiful. It got to the point quickly instead of drawing it out into a billion paragraphs. I ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 36
This was a good chapter. It had lots of detail which pleased me. I do have a few questions though. What is the correct pronunciation of the names? I can't ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 20
This was very well written with lots of detail. It made me feel like I was in the temple. There a few things you should look into though. Can you ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Frozen Devil
I would describe stuff a little more then you did. I like it when I feel like I'm in the same room as the characters and when it's lacking the ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Over the Horizon ~ Chapter 1
Very well written. If I were you I would describe Dani's connection to Mia a little better. I mean, were they partners in crime? Another question I have is why ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: The System: 3
The simplicity of this made it easy to follow. Most people I know have a problem with putting too much or too little detail in their writings. This however; has ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Snake
The vocabulary was great; not too hard and not to easy. A snake is a very good animal to pick to do a poem about because they can mean so ...
Nov 12, 2014