Pigeon

I know it'll overtake me, your pain, your crazy grin. My poor heart can't take this, It's slowly giving in. Your pressure in (the 'in' should be 'is') unbearable, I ...

Hi, pigeon here to review :) Maryann woke up to the soft sound of rain hitting her bed room window. The sky out side was dark, cold, and almost sinister ...

Wow, this is amazing. I don't think I really have anything helpful to offer. I will say that I loved the unobtrusive rhythm in your words. It's really beautiful. Also, ...

Anyways- so it's kind of rough, but I like it, given the conditions. I like it too :) It's very prettily written and I like how simply you deal with ...

Well, this is an interesting...insight! I like it. :) The only grammar things I noticed were: There's more into this should be 'in', not 'into' a teen's mind than what ...

I miss you. And i'm I'm sure that, you miss me too, and this is what makes me feel blue. I was just wondering; do you use the word blue ...

Well, I liked this and thought it was nicely put together, so mostly just grammar nitpicks from me today :) Oh, and I haven't read Beautiful yet Sinister, but I ...

Okay, first of all, I mean no offense. Sometimes it's just irritating to see people who call themselves Good Christians who are filled with hate and condescension, and forget the ...

Hey! :) I agree with what easilyinspired said, and I have a couple of things to add. 1. Be careful of the expressions you use. You've created a grand fantasy ...

Hi! :) I'm pigeon and I'm here to review your work. The day began the same way as usual ; far too early. Even the sun seemed to have risen ...

Hi there! :) I really like the character Katy and you've set tis up to be a really interesting story! I'd love to see where it ends up. A few ...

T ake back the gifts and give them away to children who can't write their lists and so never get to play. E very other I would get rid of ...

I really liked these! Pigeons are pretty awesome! :D Just one thing: I knew I existed right on the other side Should the second 'I' be there? These are really ...

Hi! I thought this was a really beautiful poem in a twisted way. I loved pretty much the whole thing, I'm just going to have a go at reviewing the ...

Hehe, this is great. In my opinion those letters which are in the British spelling and not the American spelling aren't 'extra letters', you can hear them when the words ...