PiesAreSquared

ZLYF here to review for you! Messenger, I'm like your reviewing ghost! This is a very nice little piece you have. (Yeah, I know it's chapter two!) Alright, let's get ...

Hey Dragon, ZLYF here for a review! I love this piece, especially the subtle humor. Did the previous reviewer say the same? needs repeating! Alright. I don't find any significant ...

Hey clown! Can I call you clown? That just sounds great in an internet handle! Anyway, on with my reviews. Let me first take the time to say this. This ...

Hi to you, DragonRider! I am here to review! This is an interesting chapter, to say the least, and I am a master of understatement! Let's use the nitpick tool ...

Hey thegirlwhowrites! I wrote a review for this but it seeped away into the void. None the better, let's do it again and get you out of the green room!! ...

Alright! Here to review! Again, I must emphasize that this is a good piece! So I'm onto the nitpicks! ...I never would have thought it took so long for the ...

Alright love. Here am I to review!! Ok firstly this is a really good piece. I will put that out before you go into depression! feels as if I am ...

Here I am at your service. To review I am come, to leave you bits of wisdom gathered I have from the great masters that dwell behind the green and ...

Wow wow wow! Hold your horses, my dear! You need to review other people's works! That gives you points to separate the chapters nicely so readers don't feel dumped. I'm ...

Yay! I have another review coming in here! I think in addicted to your writings. Never have I seen so well plotted a story here! Let's get those nitpicks out ...

Ha yes finally another piece for me! This is marvelous! Of course I am not reviewing in chronological order. I am doing so from the oldest not reviewed to the ...

No one reviews your work? Oh well, me to your rescue!! Seriously, how do you write so well and remain unpublished? This is a crime punishable by instant publishing. On ...

Alright. Yet another review for you! Let's begin with nitpicks. I don't agree with messenger. There are errors, sadly. ...However, in a fit stupidity beyond Adsul’s understanding,... You forgot "of"

Messenger, I love you. Anyway, john, your work has been here so long without a review or even a like that it is sadness at its height. Let's get you ...

Alright. ZLYF here to review this ancient artifact! I have no idea why this piece has less reviews and likes than it should have. Surely we of YWS are not ...