Picklesole

Hello! I really like the idea behind your poem! I like how you represent the biases of the different people as very different things: ashes and the sun. What is ...

Thank you so much for the kind review! Yes, I do plan on continuing once I have a little more time to write, don't worry! Maybe I'll have it be ...

Well as for changing it, it could help to just add a bit more at the end of the current moment he's in, if that makes sense. Introductions are written ...

Thank you for the feedback! I don't really know why I didn't state any reasons, the poem seemed finished when I wrote the last line, and I guess it makes ...

Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you so much for the positive feedback! :)

Thank you so much for the compliments and feedback!

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I didn't really think about adding anymore musical terms, but that's a good idea. :)

Thank you for the feedback! Yeah, I'm not the greatest at punctuation in poetry.. :)

Oh cool, it worked! Yes! :D

Oh cool thanks, I always mess up those kinds of words. :) Thanks! :)

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'm not really sure how to punctuate a sonnet :)

Oh, thank you!

Thanks! :) I have other poems from a REALLY long time ago if you want to check those out, but they're not that good in my opinion...but yes I shall ...

I don't really have much to say, other than that this is really good. :)