Picklesole

Hi, it's me. Again. Anyway, I really liked the poem, but the capitalizing of the words kinda threw me off. I have a feeling you did that to lead up ...

I like this very much, it's very intriguing. But I do have some stuff to say. Ana seems too perfect, honestly. I haven't detected one flaw in her, so I ...

Hello! Let me just say first off, welcome to YWS! Okay, so besides a couple of missed letters, nothing's wrong here. But with the last line, you left me hanging! ...

I like how this isn't what most poems called "Despair" would be about. Honestly I was a little hesitant clicking on this, but I am thoroughly impressed. Instead of it ...

To be completely honest, I clicked on this just because the name was so different. But I actually really love this! I thought it was clever to portray Ruth's "other ...

Hey... I will admit, I had to read the first stanza a couple times because of the nonsensical second line but it makes sense after you read the rest of ...

This was really interesting! It takes a very different perspective on death than I would have thought of. It flowed well too. The only thing I would revise is capitilizing ...

Hello! Okay, first things first, this was super awesome, but there are a couple things I'd like to mention. 1) NAMES!!!! Where are they?? It was almost unnoticable until the ...

This is very intriguing, though honestly there's not much to review here. I mean, you're talented at saying what you have to say in a few sentences but I didn't ...

This is very intriguing, though honestly there's not much to review here. I mean, you're talented at saying what you have to say in a few sentences but I didn't ...

Hello! Okay, so I don't think that anything you post will be in need of much critique, you're are that awesome of a writer. I really only have one thing. ...

Hello, Picklesole here! Okay, so I also love this as much as the first chapter. And like I said in the last review, I recommend italicizing Sam's thoughts. I think ...

Hello! I thought this was amazing. I mean, I don't usually read things that are so much like real life, but the way you write just made me read more! ...

Hey! I think this is awesome. It has a sweet mood, even though he and Rose are dead in a sense. I'm ninety-nine percent sure that the narrator is a ...

Hey Uni! I would like to say well done. Very well done. I truly think I'll have a nightmare about this, which for you is good because that's just what ...