Picklesole

Hey there! I decided to look at some of your other poetry, and I'm glad I did! I like the descriptions you gave, and that you correctly shortened memories and ...

Wow, this is an awesome poem! I don't really have anything to say other than watch out for certain lines with one or two more syllables to flow completely, but ...

Hey there, sorry for not reviewing until now! Okay, lets get started, shall we? "You know that this is what we have. The space program didn't give us much of ...

Hey there! So this review I'll warn you is going to be a bit long, because I'm doing a lot of micro editing. But first, let me start more general. ...

Hey! So this is my first time reviewing a song, so don't take what I say with a grain of salt, I guess. Anyway, so I thought this was cool. ...

Hello! There was so much emotion in this, it's great! I think this is a wonderful moment to capture, it's definitely a sad yet inspiring moment. What an interesting name ...

Hey there! To start, I think this is definitely an interesting way to write, it did do what I think you might have been hoping for, which was catch my ...

Heya there! This is turning into a really decent novel! I noticed only a couple things that I thought I'd mention. I'm just experimenting here don't mind me. He noticed ...

Hey there! Okay, I really like this chapter! (I like all of your chapters what am I talking about.) I like how you've brought in Jaden's POV, though I do ...

Hello! So an interesting turn of events here! With the Halavarde soldiers to Detrick, this is quite an eventful chapter! Oh man all of those sentences ended with an exclamation ...

Hey there again! So this is my favorite chapter as of now, even though I'm only on Chapter Two. I like the action, very fast paced in a good way. ...

Hello! On to Chapter One! So this is a good start to the novel, I think it definitely sets up the next chapters well. The ending is my favorite part, ...

Hello! So this is a super intriguing prologue; it's definitely one of the better prologues that I've read on the site. It sets up an interesting situation that I'll be ...

Hello! Wow, what a powerful piece! The emotion was awesome, maybe really sad, but awesome. I really like how she compares her favorite movie to her own situation, it makes ...

Hey there! So this is an interesting way to write this. I usually am not a fan of excessive dialogue but I think you've managed to make it essential to ...