PickledChrissy

Heya, Chrissy here for a review! First off, lovely piece of work. :D Very vivid images in very few words. It's hard to do that. You managed it easily. I'm ...

Heya, Chrissy back again for the review. A pointer for next time, when you post a revised edition of a chapter you need to post it as a separate work. ...

Thanks, Comrie! So it wasn't obvious that she was in a dream? I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing...

Awesome piece of art. :D

Thanks, comrie!About that slip up with the government agency. Would it work if he called it a organization? She does mention one. Actually, I took Nyx completely out. I tried ...

Yup, and more so.

Will do.

Thanks, Selina! Maybe I do need to make her a little nicer. She turning out a lot more vicious than I meant for her too be.

Yeah, it's a re-write of the beginning. Thanks for the review Annie! Oh, and about him being so calm. Just you wait.

Shad up.

There! I messaged you! Happy?

I think it's your fault. :'( You must not want to talk with me.

You'd better talk with me soon, Missy. Otherwise you are going to be in sooo much trouble.

You had me worried when I clicked on this. It turned out to be funny, and I liked it. What's could be considered graphic about a picture of a moldy ...

I love the idea of writing one of your dreams. I've wanted to do the same for a while. Of course, in the dream I want to write, I end ...