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Re: Star crossed lovers chapter 1.1 (rough draft)
Okay. I understand. If you ever do post more, keep me in mind.
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Chocoholics Anonymous
Um, wow? I don't really know what else to say. This must be the first time I've ever seen anything like this. Good job! :D While I don't really like ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Ghosts of War.
Thanks for the review! I'm really out of practice with writing so this was my way of getting back in. I'll work on those parts you pointed out, see if ...
Mar 23, 2016 -
Re: Flawed Child
You're alive? :D Thanks, crs. We really need to chat sometime.
Jan 3, 2016 -
Re: American Citizen.
Thanks, MK! I know, I know. I can't stand that part. I still think its true, but I need to express myself differently.
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
Thanks, Kenzie!
Sep 15, 2015 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno 1.2
Thanks for the review, Blue. As for Phoenix being able to beat the hell out of Eric, I'm trying to make my novel realistic. And no amount of training can ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
Thanks, Ark! I'll be working on this, I know I did a pretty bad job on expressing what I believe. And what I meant with the "Love your neighbor" is ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
Thanks for the review, LITTLE sister. Must I constantly remind you that I am the tallest girl in the family?
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
Thanks, Elinor! It's always nice to know that your work is appreciated.
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
Thanks, Steam! I realize this needs a lot of work, that's why I posted it. It's the first time I've written something like this. I knew it turned out pretty ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Amphitheater.
You're welcome! And actually, I would be fine if I could feel that way about anything I wrote. I sometimes want to strangle my characters.
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Reader's Guide to Middle School (Edit #2)
You're welcome! :D
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: My plot idea- Advice would be appreciated
ChocolateCello, the idea of there still being friction between homos and people who are against it is perfectly fine. Your idea of us working past it is unrealistic. It is ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: My plot idea- Advice would be appreciated
ChocolateCello, the idea of there still being friction between homos and people who are against it is perfectly fine. Your idea of us working past it is unrealistic. It is ...
Aug 30, 2015
