PickledChrissy

You definitely need a mystery dude in every story. ;) Okay, that makes sense. It does fit her personality. Sure, just leave that part the way it is. Yeah, do ...

It's fun! Write another! :P

Where in the world did you come up with this?

Thanks, Comrie! I'll tag you when the next part comes out, which should be pretty soon. Yup, chimera is baadd. Makes it fun to write about. Though I do have ...

Thanks, Scribbles! I hadn't actually intended to post it, but someone was nagging me to, so I did. I guess it was better than I thought. :D

Okay!

Thanks, Tigerlilly! I'll take a look at it and see what I can do. :D

Thanks, Aylisha! Welcome to YWS! :D

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it, and yes that is correct. It's called a stanza. Welcome to YWS, btw. :D

Thanks, Mountainclimber! I'll take a look at the third stanza.

Thanks, Livy! I don't usually write in third person so this was a new experience for me. I'll try working on it, especially what you just pointed out! :D

Thanks!

Thanks, csr! Good luck on review day, even though you are on the wrong team. :P

Thanks for the review, Books! I wasn't trying to keep the "punching tempo" but I like it that way, anyways. :D

Thanks, Rose! Yeah, that's my favorite part as well!