PickledChrissy

I'm still planning on reviewing this, Marcy, but Mom said I could only read it if Therese read it first. I'm having a hard time pinning her down.

I LOVE this poem! Keep writing! :D

Beautiful! I LOVE this poem. :D

Thanks, Selina!

Do that, I'd like to know. :D

Thanks, Selina! I'll change it around. I always had a hard part making that little section work properly.

Thanks, Rose! I actually wrote that first part without knowing what it was about. :D I figured it out after that.

As a runner, I can relate to this. :D

I think that's me. I had a local writing group read it, and they all thought it was a girl as well.

Looks like I am going to have to do some serious rewriting. :( It's a guy!

Thanks!

Why, thank you very much, Selina the weirdo. Yes, I'll fix that. I'm going to be posting the revised edition of this part soon.

Thanks Selina! Speaking of which, I really need to write the next part. Oh, and does it sound like a boy or girl? There appeared to be some confusion there.

Thanks, Annie! :D

Thanks, and btw I actually have five pages of random bits of poetry. I was trying to write, but it ended up not to work. But at least I got ...