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Half European half Asian, and where I am in the UK it's a local legend yeah.

Well I'm glad it gave you that bard vibe, that's sorta what I was going for. The riddle as a poetic form was popular throughout the middle ages to medieval ...

Well this type of writing is more of an experiment for me. I'm writing so verbose to give an impression of the era and class of the main character. It ...

Your points about pacing or whatever and the POV have been greatly helpful and I have edited the master document accordingly. I suppose I should clarify though that he was ...

Thank you :D I agree, writing those last two lines felt so forced. But I was tired of writing and I guess I just sold myself short of a full ...

Why thank you. I'm terrible at planning poems which is what lead to those problems.

Thanks, and to say it isn't meant, while not entirely grammatically correct, means the world has no intention.

and to think you said this wasn't good.

You've got it right on a certain scale :D really a poem is about whatever you think it's about but when I wrote this one I was considering the challenge ...

I know how you feel , my father died two years ago. I completely understand the writing thing, at the start I wanted to tell everyone about it too, I ...

I know how you feel , my father died two years ago. I completely understand the writing thing, at the start I wanted to tell everyone about it too, I ...

thanks I'm glad you liked it and caught on to the meaning. I'm normally not so good at conveying meaning.

Well I'm glad it could make someone think, really that's the ultimate goal for any piece of work in my opinion.

thank you for the comment, I wish you never have to lose someone, but if does happen I hope you part on good terms.

thank you