Periwinkle

I. NITPICKS You hang your head—how did you get here? “You hang your head” that doesn’t make sense to me. When I hang my head it usually means I’m frustrated ...

I think Breaking Dawn was okay. I thought it was too perfect...Bella becomes a vampire, gets Edward, can still be BFFs with Jacob, a baby, her human family, and no ...

I. NITPICKS [Before I get into this review I must say that I was listening to Soviet Kitsch while reading this, and the three songs that I were listening to ...

I've only read My Sister's Keeper and I absolutely loved it. I actually cried at the end, and then I tried to read The Pact , but I didn't really ...

I don’t know how all this happens, but it does, and it happens to me. It seems that I always get the fallen angel on my shoulder that’s screwing up ...

Elesther felt his hands before she saw them. “You look beautiful tonight,” Khelar said as he gently brushed Elesther’s brunette hair with his fingers. She held his palms to her ...

I like the Twilight series as entertainment. It's not a deep read and it's something I can read for a day if I'm bored. Plus I like vampire yeah. Bella ...

I. NITPICKS So here I am, lying in my closet, my shoes poking me every which direction, hiding from the monster until he comes to get me. I don’t like ...

I. NITPICKS I’m pretty convinced that my Dad is beginning to go through a sort of early onset of senile dementia. My Mum noticed the first symptoms[s],[/s] when one early ...

I. NITPICKS At the beginning, We were there. After we had served our time, They arrived. And then, for a while, there was peace. Quiet and calm. Then, You imposed ...

Prologue "Are you ready, love?" I ask him, clutching his hand. My blood father was ready to drain his blood and replace it with ours. "Yeah. Let's do it," he ...

I. NITPICKS “Ravyn we need to talk.” Misaki said to him slowly. Be consistent with his name - it’s either “Ravyn” or “Raven”. “ Well… I wanted to ask you ...

I. NITPICKS My heart picked up its pace as I pushed and squeezed through the crowd. My [I don’t like the repetition of beginning two sentences of “my”] mind became ...

I. NITPICKS As my favorite song danced out of the stereo, I bobbed my head along[s],[/s] [it’s better to just say “I made” and nix the comma] making my way ...

Listening to the thunder rolling overhead she crawled into her small hideaway to get closer to the window. She looked out at the grey sky with a smile, this was ...