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Percybeth

Everything happens for a reason.

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: discomposure

    Ahh I think you may have flipped the entire poem from it's intentions. Most everything described is about who the narrator has fallen in love with, not about herself. I ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: discomposure

    Thank you so much! ^.^

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dull Scissors

    Thank you so much for clarifying! It literally makes so much more sense now and i love this poem even more! :D Both lines that begin with "to help me" ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Misjudgment

    Than you so much for this review! That's a really really great idea and I'm going to change that! I'm super glad that you got the idea of this poem. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Desire

    Hey, thank you for this review! I really appreciate everything you said. :) I know that the blind thing sounds a little weird, but I kind of tried to describe ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Misfortune

    Wow, thank you so much. I think that I am going to fix basically all of your 'point-outs'. This helps a lot, Happy Review day!

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Misfortune

    Hey KatyaElefant! Thank you for this cute review! I didn't notice my missing apostrophe (whoops)! And honestly, I'm not even British. xD I just really like how they spell it, ...

    Jun 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Last sin

    Haha, no problem! I get super attached to all of my pieces and I get slightly defensive too xD so I get that, if you feel it. :P

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Misjudgment

    I love hearing how people interpret my poems! :) If you want how my state of mind when I wrote it, look at my reply on the first review :D ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Misjudgment

    Hey, thanks for this review! I said growing instead of golden the second time because I didn't want to be super repetitive as I was being. The clouds weren't mad ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our love was black and white

    I do! I've been teaching myself recently!

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our love was black and white

    I always love when you review my poems! And it makes me feel so great that you love them all too.

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Our love was black and white

    Aww oh my goodness, I'm honored to be your 100th review! Congratulations too! :) Really this review makes me feel fabulous, I loved every English word and French. (Thank you ...

    Jun 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: 1

    Ahh, I just read your new ending and now I'm loving that too!

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Remorse

    Thank you so much for this. The entire time reading, I was smiling and I'm grateful for that. Thank you. :)

    Jun 10, 2014


When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind