PeppermintHoliday

It strikes me as a wonderful version of a visual timetable. It's like those moments when you look at how far it's been since that point yet it's exciting to ...

Wow. Without a doubt, this is a very interestingly written one. I like the subtle power of your opening and closing lines. The imagery is wonderful but I feel your ...

Quite an interesting piece of poetry indeed. I'm intrigued by the presence of this "stranger". He/she seems to be a metaphor for something expected yet came too soon. It was ...

O.O It's one of those few rare perspectives where irrationality seems so easily rational and the morals of the readers intervene to secure sanity. It's refreshing in it's own grotesque ...

It's a wonderful play on the imagination of the reader. Very realistic yet fantastical and well-written. It makes you wonder about the lives of the two personas yet leaves the ...