The hidden me.

by sharonkekana
  • October 18, 2012
  • Poetry
  • Mystery / Suspense · Realistic
  • natural me!
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My entry leads to your exit.
When will i get chance to know you better.
I search for you even when you are in my presence.
You are so far away from me yet so close.

I'm not asking for a lot 
An open  window  will do,
so we can view the wonders of nature together,
The world waits for you to come out
but I'm dying to know you.
How do you live within me
yet so hidden deep within me
from me.

The hidden me,
how i wish you could come out to me for the world,
that awaits your presence.
I cannot live i lie anymore, pretend to be what Iam not.
It kills me to know that the true me is you yet you are so hidden
and i cannot describe you to anyone.
Come out hidden me.
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sharonkekana commented · Tue Feb 19, 2013 6:36 pm

hidden you will be in no time
for the storms have shaken your walls and broken them
its time to come out and
I say come out to the world

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sharonkekana wrote a review · Fri Nov 09, 2012 2:52 pm

The day "hidden" changes its name to "found" will call for a celebration.

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sharonkekana commented · Fri Nov 09, 2012 2:31 pm

thanks peppermint i will try to do much better than this.

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PeppermintHoliday wrote a review · Fri Oct 19, 2012 9:41 am

Wow. Without a doubt, this is a very interestingly written one. I like the subtle power of your opening and closing lines. The imagery is wonderful but I feel your lines are too long. Watch out for spelling and Grammatical errors too. :D



In a world too often governed by corruption and arrogance, it can be difficult to stay true to one's literary and philosophical principles.
— Lemony Snicket