Pentavalence

np!

Np! Thanks for the clarification.

Sorry, I wasn't aware this was just for fun. You're welcome for the crit!

So cute! Love it

Wow I really hate reading my own works. I shoudl stop.

Rereading this poem makes me want to throw something for some reason. Maybe it's the fact that I'm up at 4 am and everything makes me want to throw something. ...

Rereading this poem makes me want to throw something for some reason. Maybe it's the fact that I'm up at 4 am and everything makes me want to throw something. ...

Thank you!! I appreciate your feedback :)

Thank you for taking the time to review this! Glad you liked it! :) -Pen

POV is 'point of view' shortened, and I'm sorry if I offended you! I was kind of harsh, you're right. I just feel that a story should have a conflict ...

Thank for your review Grace! What I meant to convey was that it's initially someone pining, but then they gradually realized "I wrote me a poem, Looking back on my ...

Oh, okay! I'll clarify some things for you here and then work on making them more clear in the poem: The cliff isn't literal, just a metaphor for suicide, but ...

Np :)

Thank you! I'll try to make a part 2 and have a more satisfying ending but this one was getting a little long, so I cut it off (hopefully) before ...

Hi StormCycle! Penta here with a review. I have to admit, the first paragraph turned me off a little bit. Characters should never be perfect; remember that your characters are ...