PenguinAttack

I just LOL'd like I have never LOL'd before! Fantastic, really. I was reading with my brother beside me and we both started laughing at the same time. I think ...

I loved this, not just because its a cute peice of fluff (which it is ehee) but also because you got a good theme going. I have no problem with ...

Fantastic, I completely loved this, really. It sucked me in right from the get-go (which of course means its muchas brilliante). I think you described it perfectly for your context ...

Had to give my kudos (like many before me) to a quite delightful parody. I was hestitant at first, but, as always, curiosity overcame me, and I just had to ...

I have to agree with all of the above =F hehe. I quite liked the concept of the story, and found that if i read it properly each of the ...

o.0 I have to say first off that this is a very long poem for no breaks. I understand that the intended flow may be altered from some distinct segmentation, ...

I, personally, liked this poem =] I liked the way it moved easily through the stanzas/paragraphs/whatever. I also liked the way you made it rhyme in parts. Small issues come ...

Hey there, a lovely ending, although quicker than I thought it would be. I rather love your last line =] it's a nice reference. A small criticism: "His parent s ...

Mnmm.. I have to agree with the above. Although I think with a little work, mainly a few capitals and such, you could greatly improve the reception of the peice. ...

Oh nice... lol. I quite liked that, and obviously look forward to the rest. As you know, if you can recall who I am =] I've seen your work, this ...