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Hullo Alpha! Yaay poetry! I like what you are doing here, there's a good feeling of rhythm despite the rhyme (or because of). I do feel like all of the ...

Hola emjayc! Welcome to the beautiful world of the haiku! I hazard to point out that this isn't quite a haiku but more of a senryu (I do this before ...

Hi ajruby! Hitting this up by honour of the Knights of the Green Room - and also because I love poetry! First of all I have to congratulate you on ...

Hi Niteowl! omnomnom science poetry! How utterly delicious that you are writing it - I hadn't quite realised how really wonderful science related imagery actually is. Your use of language ...

Hullo Jiro! Welcome to the YWS, I hope you enjoy posting and reviewing here! I see that your essay is about how technology has become an integral part of our ...

Hi bluewater! I feel like we have met several times before and yaaay! poetry! Not many people attempt long poetry, usually because it's difficult to maintain one idea over all ...

Hi Haven! It is lovely to see you posting poetry - I adore poetry! Is this meant to be one of those "I am" poems? It currently looks like that ...

Nia! Was this the work you asked me to look at ages ago? I apologise so much for not getting to it, if it was! I am so very terrible ...

Heylo! I think you have a totally interesting concept here. I like that she's turned in and out being a dragon at all but find it weird that she doesn't ...

Hello again! It's lovely to see you posting again, even if you're making it really hard to clear that Green Room! I have to say that long poetry is sometimes ...

Hey there! No doubt you will be utterly, completely over my existence by the time you hit this last review! I promised my last review it would be my last, ...

Hello, hello! You'll be my final review day review, I think! Aren't you honoured?! ;) I haven't read your previous chapters so I apologise for any ignorance I display about ...

Hello hello! I'm sorry that you've had this work waiting for so long without anyone commenting on it! I will admit that I haven't been able to read all of ...

Hola! Thanks for posting this excellent review day. “I punched the guy in the stomach; he dropped the gun and fell on the ground.” Why does he fall to the ...

Hola! This is a super weird story. I'd go as far as to say incredibly weird! I think a lot of the weirdness comes from reading all those chapters of ...