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Maggie! I did not forget that I owe you this, even though I totally did forget for a little while. So let's leap in. When I first read this, I ...

Hi Shaon, Congratulations on writing a complex and extensive short story, and for posting it here for everyone to read and appreciate. I'm going to get straight to the centre ...

Hi RainbowPowerPonies! As Nightcrawler has super kindly pointed out before me, this looks a lot like a synopsis one might see on the back cover of a novel rather than ...

Ohai Kyll, What is this? Another review on another of your works? Shock and awe, I know, do try to keep your socks on as I continue. (I just accidentally ...

Nah! It IS nice to see this posted, and while I'm totes happy to go easy on you I'm still going to try and zero in on one or two ...

Yo ho, Kyll, So this started slow for me and progressed in the same way for a time, kind of crawling toward the point of the story or the thrust. ...

Audster, You don't need my commentary on this but I'm going to give it to you anyway. When I first read this it didn't touch me. I sighed a little ...

Forticuno, OMNOMNOM. Like, hella noms for this piece playing with enjambment and our expectations of poetry, reading poetry and visual poetry. It's wonderful to see you experimenting and I think ...

Yo Blue, Long time, isn't it? I read the poem in the link and I understand what the poet was going for there, and I understand what you're going for ...

Heys Mya! So this takes a concerning turn toward the end, which is well done because I didn't really see that coming at all. I mean, I suspected something but ...

Hi Zoeliza, You have some great description in this piece that kept me reading the whole way through. Your pacing is solid and I enjoy your characterisation of all the ...

Hi Thundereagle! So, this is very interesting as a piece. I understand that you've thrown it in humour for the second part of the story but man, you have a ...

Did you publish this before under a different title? It seems so familiar now we are here. There is something about it that speaks to me some how. I like ...

UGH Rubric. This guy is an idiot. A fool caught up in the glamour of a nobleman who is fighting for power in a slightly more stable seat of government ...

Yo Rubric, I've not read anything by you in a million years it feels like, and dabbling here, in the gross serenity of prose feels totally wrong, but here I ...