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Hi Romania! Pen here with a review. First of all, I really enjoyed the piece, and I liked how the last line was just so flat. It added a very ...

Hi Imaginers! First, the technical bit. 1. "I have laughed when they look so clever and talk about being on the right track." This would flow better if you used ...

Hey Aria, Pen here with a review First of all, great hook. The hook is one of the most important parts of an essay, and you nailed it. Now, to ...

Hey Willow! First of all, that was a very interesting take on the Sherlock Holmes series. Being a fan of both the boos and the BBC show Sherlock, it was ...

Hi Manisha Wow. Just... Wow. My friend made a poem like this once called 'Sadat, Why Do You Hurt Mommy?' She read it in front of the entire creative writing ...

Hey Legible! First of all, that was a wonderful, terrible story. It was very well-crafted and interesting. I really could see inside his twisted mind. It was extremely interesting and ...

Hey Carina, First of all, I am reading this at 1:30 a.m. where I am, in the dark. I have a feeling that I will not be getting much sleep ...

Hi aqua! Pen here with a review. First of all, a great poem wityh a relatable, interesting message. The disjointed feel to the poem only enhanced the feeling that you ...

Hi Snoink! Once again, fantastic. There were a few problems/nitpicks however. First of all, I had a little bit of a problem with the sentence, "Elsa opened the door and ...

Hey, Wolf! First of all, I loved the theme of the poem. I also thought the execution of the theme was great. I too believe that anyone can make a ...

Wow. Certainly better than the last, and that's saying something. I thought it was interesting that she was beginning to dissent against him even in the slightest way to protect ...

Hi, Snoink! First of all, great premise for a book. I do have a few nitpicks, however. First of all, in the paragraph 'She smiled. Maybe she would eat the ...

Hi Sakura! Wow. That was fantastic. I feel the same. There is no critique on this. Just... wow. I feel the same way sometimes, with school, getting ready for college, ...

Hi Kay, A very interesting piece. I've always loved the use of irony and it is especially warranted in this case. I thought that the piece was very relatable as ...

Hi Sapi! This was certainly an interesting piece. I loved the perfectly executed rhyme scheme that does not seem forced at all. I also like the idea of something that ...