PeijiRestoration

Hello! So first off, I love this. Your expression of the girl's pain is shown clearly and masterfully. You also promote a good message of not just telling those with ...

This, like all of your other poems, is beautiful! I love the line "For a man's most faithful lover is the heartbeat of the ground." You can see just how ...

Hey, so first off, I love this! The idea of masks is common in literature, but the way you incorporated them made me fall in love with your story! The ...

Hello! Okay, so this review is likely useless, but I promised I would post something, so here we go. Overall, I love this. Ever since I saw the prompt, I ...

Henlo smol bean uwu As I've told you in person, I love this my dude. But mistakes exist, so here we go: “Oh boy, he thought, what has happened now?” should ...

Wow, this is really good! The horridness of the situation is made even more impactful by the wonderful way you write. That being said, there were some errors. Firstly, you ...

First off, I love this. The imagery you used and the feelings you brought to mind were awesome. Both the story and the poem were excellent. But, there were some ...

Hello! This is my first review, so it likely won't be super helpful, but I'm doing it anyways! First off, I just want to say that I absolutely love this. ...